Chapter 385 – Review of the Work
Hello. I am Shiura, the author of a VR travelogue who wants to be humiliated.
The VR ‘travel story’ where I want to be humiliated ends here. But Soira and her group’s ‘journey’ will continue. What a fun trip. (In fact, the travel story continues a little longer as a side story.)
I plan to continue serializing the spin-off from time to time, but I feel a great sense of disappointment as it is said to be complete.
This review alone is one episode’s worth of high-quality content. Don’t you feel how regretful it is?
▷ What I was worried about throughout the series was, ‘Will this article suck?’
To be honest, I am proud to say that the material was awesome every time. I wasn’t worried about that at all.
However, since I am a novice writer, I guess I cooked delicious ingredients in a tasteless way… I couldn’t shake those worries. It feels like spicy sea bream stew or high-quality tea milk tea.
I hope you enjoyed it.
▷ The concept of this work was ‘a novel that can be read comfortably.’ Watch when you feel like it, and take a break if you don’t feel like it.
No matter what happens to Soira and her group, it’s a game, and you can load it if you want, so you can feel at ease while reading it. I wanted to write a novel like that.
▷ I thought it would last a whole year or end quickly in less than 3 months, but after continuing for another year and 1 month, it was finally concluded.
This work was originally written for self-satisfaction.
Last spring, while searching for fantasy Yeoju rape material, a Yellowy discovered something that looked delicious and eagerly devoured it. It was a truly perfect-looking piece of work.
However, as the work progressed, things started to become more and more discordant… Finally, I got to wear a ticket all year round.
Rover realized. Ah. I have to make the feed I will scoop up.
The result was ‘a VR travel story that makes you want to be humiliated.’
▷ During the series, I thought more than once, ‘What would it have been like if it were TS?’
However, I think that the current result was possible because it was a female lead.
It was not at the level of a blue ocean, but almost a monopoly.
Female protagonist + fantasy + humiliation. It’s hard for me to say it myself, but it’s a sincere series.
Have there been any other works like this? If you have, please recommend it. Please. Let’s watch it together.
▷ What’s interesting is that it was completed before episode 400.
In the review of episode 100, it was said that it would be completed before episode 200. And we filmed episode 200.
Even in the review of episode 200, I talked about ending it before episode 300. And we filmed episode 300.
Because I am a growing writer, at episode 300, I thought, ‘Then it will be over 400, right?’ And didn’t say that it would be completed before episode 400.
But, voila!
It was completed before episode 400.
Actually, it was originally planned to have one more episode in the middle, so taking that into account, it was right that it would end in a little over 400 episodes.
I never thought the day would come when I would write a complete review.
▷ I would like to thank you all.
As I have consistently written in my reviews, it is all thanks to the love of readers that allowed me to write this work for 13 months, which will end in 3 months.
In particular, the comments were of great help.
Some people said it was erotic, some said it was the work of a lifetime, and some gave their impressions of the character.
Every morning, I was happy to press Novelpia’s alarm button.
It is undecided when I will start writing, but I hope to see you in the next work.
I received several donations and even received fan art for my first post, so there is no limit.
Really. We cannot leave out the people who wrote reviews with sincerity.
I think the most memorable review was even before episode 20. I was really happy when the first community reviews were posted and the indicators rose sharply. At the time, I didn’t even know the reader community existed, so I thought it was a bulletin board within Novelpia.
Of course, we would also like to thank everyone who has left comments and comments in the community since then.
Thank you again.
▷ Future schedule
I should also tell you my future schedule.
I plan to take a break for about 1 to 2 weeks with the completion label attached. This is sending a message to those who were staying overnight that they can now watch.
After that, after it is completed, we will serialize various side stories on an irregular basis.
There are quite a few settings that I introduced but ended up being MacGuffins. Actually, it’s not a MacGuffin, I just missed the timing to retrieve it.
The potion package that Sophie gave, the small dragon in Flora’s illustration, the Demon Lord’s agent distributing erotic items, etc… It would be nice if we could salvage at least a little bit from the side story.
It is not something that was posted irregularly and published daily in the early days of the work, but is really an irregular series.
I think it will probably be like that until I start writing the next work.
▷ Next work
There are several things I am considering for my next work.
1. TS Munchkin Academy drama like soup.
[Modern Fantasy][TS][Academy][Munchkin][Instructor]
This is an article that was rejected during the second interview for A Million Class. After failing the last writer’s class, I thought, ‘Was it too minor?’ So I chose Gukbap Pick. After using it, it wasn’t bad.
However, in this case, since it is neither a female protagonist nor an adult film, the disadvantage is that it is not known whether it will suit the tastes of readers who are currently watching it. I’m also considering a coming-of-age story with students as the main characters rather than instructors, but I’m not sure.
2. Revenge of the female protagonist’s humiliation
[High Level][Fantasy][Female Protagonist][Revenge][Insult]
The protagonist, who was a precious person, gets caught up in a villain’s plot and his family is destroyed. Just before the protagonist dies, he is noticed by an evil spirit and makes a contract with him. The evil god gives the protagonist the power to achieve revenge, but in return, for every power he gives, he imposes one obscene restriction…
This is an overview. Unlike this work, the main character has a strong sense of chastity, but it seems like it will be something that endures for revenge, and sometimes cannot endure.
But I wrote Yeojumul this time, and I want to write another work at least once. It’s a bit of a low priority for me.
3. NTL/NTR based on bonsai games
[High Level][Fusion Fantasy][Game Fantasy][Harem][NTL/NTR]
Heroines in bonsai games like the main character for almost no reason. Don’t you think it would be exciting to see those heroines being taken away?
I planned it with that in mind, but NTR is a minor pick, just like the female protagonist… I think it might turn over and become NTL.
4. Returner TS Magical Girl
[High Level][Modern Fantasy][Variable TS][Magical Girl][Returner]
Asil returns to modern times and regains her original body, but the Earth she knew has somehow become a world overrun by monsters and magical girls, and Asil has the ability to transform into the body of a beautiful girl who was TS in this world… Asil, who was secretly working as a magical girl to earn her pocket money, one day meets a girl with purple hair in her back alley. What will happen when meeting this suspiciously familiar girl?
This is Part 2 of Asil, which I once mentioned in a review.
However, since it is already a variable TS, I want to form a harem, but then it becomes an NTR where magical girls get mistreated, so it is difficult to use, and it is not good to use just TS rape instead of a variable type. I have many concerns in many ways.
Etc., There are tentacles that were discontinued after being used last time, and there are many more.
However, while I was writing this work, I became unemployed… I think it will probably be difficult to serialize properly until I get a job.
Thank you for your understanding.
▷ From now on, it will be TMI about the character or work. Please read it lightly, feeling like it’s a staff roll or cookie video.
Soira
He’s the main character. This is a character I have a deep attachment to.
In this era where the term “TS skin” Is rampant because it says TS and depicts a female, it can be said that Soira is a female protagonist but acts like a man, so it can be seen as a female fetish skin. But it sucked, right?
Still, I love you. There seems to have been a bit of controversy regarding personality, but it’s a game, so please take a look.
If we do something like Roller Coaster Tycoon, don’t we find ourselves discovering things we didn’t know before?
And she wrote at length why Soira became such a pervert in the first place… Honestly, I think it was my mistake.
Just say, ‘I pervert. Even if I ended the explanation with ‘Hihi, use a dildo!’, I think the readers would have just thought that was it and moved on.
Flora
It is a victim of poor writer skills and incorrect character settings. I’m sorry Flora…
The default setting is ‘Princess of a ruined country with no sacred knowledge.’ This wasn’t a problem at first. I thought it would be completed soon.
But as the series gets longer… Unless you’re a fool, how could you go through that much and not develop sexual knowledge? Half of the character was destroyed.
And with the appearance of Asil, who is good at hitting, his role in conversation has decreased significantly. It’s all due to the author’s lack of ability.
The reason why Flora’s family appeared a lot in the second half was to restore some of the character and importance that had been shattered. I don’t know if she did well.
I’m sorry Flora!!!
Asil
This is a character created very spontaneously.
In fact, the character itself, with the concept of a possessed person, had already been planned. However, she was a male character, and she was going to be a side story character who was in charge of humiliation from a man’s point of view by offering fraudulent items such as a hypnosis app.
But suddenly I broke the drift and joined as a TS heroine. Fortunately, she didn’t react too badly. However, it cannot be denied that with the TS heroine added to her tag, the pool of readers who had been cut in half by ‘heroine’ alone has been cut in half again.
Still, it’s a good app. It was also nice to argue with Soira.
Asil’s special move has been planned for a long time. The only thing is, ‘This person is also a spirit of some kind.’ So what kind of spirit is it? At this point, terrible worries began…
Coris Village Three
In fact, they were originally Soira’s party members.
Soira, Flora, and Runon travel together, and whenever an erotic event occurs, Runon is tempted, but is left alone and lonely, thinking about Sophie, whom she left behind in the village… But in reality, Sophie is falling for Kiven little by little… That was the idea. That’s why there was an NTR tag at the beginning of the work.
However, when Asil joined as her colleague, her original plan was reversed, and she became just a one-off supporting role.
Emperor and Guard
I didn’t think anything of it when it first appeared. It was a time when there were only a few previous works, and the number of views could be counted, so it was a spinoff that I included with the mindset of ‘I’ll just write it the way I feel like it!’
But it was strangely popular.
It was a happy miscalculation. Thanks to that, it appeared several times.
Of course, it will appear in the side stories written after the hiatus.
The three dukes
At first, Marti was going to be NTRed by being blackmailed with a hypnotized crystal ball… I played it. Well. The development of the frame wasn’t bad, right?
After Shilen Lame handed Soira her equipment, she didn’t come out. She was, in fact, scheduled to appear. I think she will appear at least once in the side story after it is completed.
The review ends here.
I thought it was long, so I wanted to shorten it a little, but since it was a monumental first review, I decided to just write it down.
Thank you for reading.
We would be happy if you would be interested in the side stories that will be serialized irregularly after the hiatus.
