Chapter 194 – Volume 39 – Fake Genius and Real Genius (4)
First of all, what Amori said, ‘I only made the flow’ was true.
Because this manuscript was not finished, it was really close to a continuity that only made up storylines and stories.
However, it was difficult to agree at all on whether this was really something that could be expressed in such light words.
“What’s wrong? What is this about?”
“You can think of it as similar to Caller Unknown. The basic flow feels like that.”
Perhaps Amori made it while thinking about it.
However, in the case of an unknown sender, it was a simple game book with puzzles and reasoning that seemed childish even though I did my best.
To be honest, the choices aren’t organic, but most of those problems are overcome with emotion.
“Then this is also a work of time travel?”
“I can see that.”
However, this work did not need to overcome through such emotions in the first place.
The results flowing according to the choices were so organic and clear, and even the sub-options that could be thought of as insignificant caused a butterfly effect.
I also liked the detailed rice cakes and hints that were hidden where they could easily pass by.
“It’s of incredible quality. It’s unbelievably perfect for a first piece.”
“But isn’t it weak to express a little bit of emotion? Is it because the picture is cute?”
“It’s not such a problem, well, it’s the first time, so there must be weak points.”
However, even including that, it is evaluated that it is too great to be considered the first work.
If you just look at the results, I don’t think it’s on the same level as my work overall.
Actually, that alone is huge, but if that was the only thing, I wouldn’t have been so embarrassed.
“Actually, the really embarrassing thing is the puzzles that go into this piece.”
For example, when using time travel magic, there is a kind of puzzle, through which you have to decide where to return.
Whether or not you make a mistake with the result, you become an option and develop your own story.
Even if you continue to eat this puzzle throughout the work, the utilization was so high that it was difficult to infer the inside story.
Yeah, in the end, the most surprising thing was this part.
It’s perfect for easy access to never-before-seen puzzles and quizzes, yet with depth.
I don’t think this is the part where the real admiration comes out.
It’s as simple as imagining it with your head.
It’s difficult to find a good way to implement each one of them this way.
Of course, it took enough time for the other kids to make a work, but even so, it’s not easy to come out just by spending time.
“Is this a genius…?”
Although it was a talent in a slightly different direction to be seen as a comic genius.
It was a result that definitely fits the word genius.
Come to think of it, Amori became a genius when the ability of a succubus increased by soaking in semen.
‘Originally, I thought he was a genius with a great brain for doing lewd things.’
In fact, the genre that really stands out must have been the part where I came up with this kind of idea and completed it.
Be good at finding the mathematical logic and theory needed to create something.
If you don’t, that’s the kind of genius you create.
“It’s great. Is this the part that should be so surprising? Honestly, it just feels normal, maybe because I’ve come across a more surprising fact about Kali and Siu.”
“That’s right. There is a feeling that the threshold of surprise has risen. Even if a real genius said that…”
However, in my opinion, there are too many subtle parts to call myself a genius.
Basically, since the time I invested to build my skills now, I have far more than these guys.
Unlike here, in a world where you can get piled up teachings here and there, you can easily learn to a certain extent, so your skills are good, right?
‘Well, in their eyes, there’s no genius as great as me.’
It was like a bug play that happened because I had memories of my previous life.
What if these guys are real geniuses?
I can be seen as a fake genius created through the memories of my previous life.
“Senior…?”
“Did you sleep well?”
Still not quite awake, Amori started looking at me with her eyes wide open.
Realizing that I had been stroking her hair involuntarily, she gently lowered her hand.
Amori didn’t seem to like that, so she leaned her body against me and played her angst.
“By the way, aren’t you forgetting something? You forgot why you came here.”
“Because you know?”
“Then why are you doing that without asking?”
“That’s that. This is this. I’m already happy right now, so there’s no need to do anything extra.”
While I was sighing, I felt YuRia’s abundant breasts clinging to my arm before I knew it.
Seeing that, Rosaria’s heart rushed as if she would not lose…
I could feel the strawberry-shaped piercings on her nipples, not her breasts.
“What are you all doing?”
“Yeah, I think it happened because the senpai is a playboy who carelessly makes fun of his cock.”
“Isn’t that just a serious swearing?”
“Oh no way. I just thought that since you’re a pervert, she’d be happy to say this.”
The sale of cocoa today feels a bit painful.
Maybe that’s why, when I see that true education is becoming more difficult, I still think that Cocoa’s selling skills have not died.
As expected, once the lower leg recovers, I will have to start training right away.
“Somehow, the story took a strange turn. Amori read the manuscript while you were sleeping.”
“How about it?”
“Okay. Wouldn’t it be enough to proceed as it is?”
Although it is a work that shows genius in a completely different part from the part where I admire Amori’s drawing style.
In the end, it doesn’t change that the quality is good and it’s an impressive work.
Of course, like Rosaria said earlier, there are some regrets, but…
“Oh, you said it was okay? Really?”
“The choices and puzzle quality are much better than the sender unknown.”
“Quo, the quality is good. I just copied it…”
It’s just that I got a little material, but it’s a completely different content to see that I copied it.
Even if you really follow it, if it’s this much, it’s just upward compatible.
That quality is good is true no matter how you look at it.
“Anyway, the finished version is expected.”
“Are there any missing parts?”
“…I’d be lying if I said there wasn’t, but it’s already amazing enough for a first piece.”
However, there is no need to obsess over it and try to improve the quality of the first work.
In the first place, it is increasing little by little while doing it itself.
Aside from that, the quality of the work is…
“I hate that.”
“What?”
“My goal is to be a senior, not someone else. I want to make a perfect work like a senior. Of course, I shouldn’t say things like this because I’m just starting out, but if there’s something I can improve on, I want to do more.”
“I have a lot of compromises.”
“That’s what senpai can get better at, but did you compromise?”
“…That’s not it.”
Now, neither my claim nor Amori’s claim were wrong.
Amori’s opinion that if it can be improved, it should be improved and presented is close to the correct answer.
But in my opinion, I said this because it is best to improve through experience.
…However, it was difficult to say anything about Amori’s comments as she tackled me while talking about my personality.
Even in my case, if I could do it, I tended to keep improving until that limit.
In the end, thanks to that, I was able to show only high-quality works even though it was the first time.
Of course, even in the original world, it wasn’t like this at all.
It must have reflected the desire that if I showed the wrong path, it would have an adverse effect on the comics world.
However, my traces that Amori saw and followed would be in that form, so it is difficult to make excuses for it.
“Of course, I know that the senior said it because he thought of me. But I don’t like that either.”
“What you want to be is ‘Siwoo’?”
“Yeah.”
Amori said she wanted to become a cartoonist similar to me.
So the final show of the work is that I want to present it from the same point of view as mine.
It was a direction I hadn’t thought of at all, so I fell into trouble for a while.
“If the senior is me, how far will I improve?
Amori’s appearance, speaking so confidently, made me think that it was definitely beautiful.
Looking around, YuRia and Rosaria, who were clinging to me, also nodded in agreement with her words.
Is this what everyone thinks the same?
“Okay. Then let’s solve that part as much as possible.”
“Really!?”
“But Amori, I’ve said it before. Contrary to what you think, I’m not that great of a person.”
“…The world’s best cartoonist says that.”
“For now, but maybe in the future I’ll give you this place.”
I was just telling the truth.
The moment I sprinkle all of my know-how into this world, I’m virtually out of date.
But I think I’ve done enough with just that.
Of course, I like comics, so even if I’m not at the top of the industry, I’ll enjoy drawing them.
“No.”
“Yes?”
“Senior, no matter how you think about it, it’s not.”
“…What?”
“I understand what you mean, but please don’t say such weak things.”
It was a part that I realized again thanks to Amori in the first place.
I don’t want to become the top in the industry, I just want to show someone a work that puts my heart into it.
But when Amori denied it head-on, it felt strange.
“I can’t imagine it now, but if we go later, the seniors might really be pushed by us. But you shouldn’t say that.”
“Uh…?”
“We will do our best to catch up with her seniors. On the contrary, seniors will do their best to keep their place.”
“…!”
Then I realized what she meant.
