Chapter 157 – #157. Bad Comments
I asked for it, so I set up a delicious meal, but my boyfriend was preparing porridge in front of me.
“Brother. Eat rice rice. I have to eat to cheer up, so I get cursed at.”
“No… But I’m really a bit unfair…”
It’s usually me who frowns in our couple, but today I feel like something has been reversed.
In my mind, like the readers in the comments, if I wanted to say something to my brother, I was making that kind of expression, so my mouth didn’t fall.
“Ah… It’s okay. Think carefully before you can use it.”
“Did I make the development too strange?”
I thought my voice would rise when I started talking about the novel in earnest, but I can’t ignore it.
“I don’t think it’s a direction that will satisfy everyone.”
“Naeun. Then, what is your ideal ending?”
It’s an ideal ending…
The ending I expected after following [I imprisoned her] In real time from the beginning of her play until now…
“I just want it to end with Lee Jin-sung having a relationship with the heroines until the end.”
“Are you telling me to get married?”
“No… That’s not the case, but the expression of throwing it away…”
Even as I spoke, there was an ambiguous feeling to explain.
The ending of Lee Jin-sung marrying the heroines and starting a family seemed to be against the odds, even to me, a reader.
Should I just say that the scene itself is difficult to imagine from the reader’s point of view?
Somehow, there could have been a development of registering the marriage, but I thought that was not an important factor in this novel.
“…I really don’t quite understand what I mean by drift.”
“It’s not like they’re just playing around with heroines and then suddenly throwing them away.”
“No. But everyone knew that Lee Jin-seong was originally this kind of guy.”
My brother raised a bloodline towards me with a tone of sincerity that he did not understand.
“Uh? From episode 1, Lee Jin-seong was said to have been irreplaceable trash in the world. This is a kid who takes a normal girl and rapes and sexually tortures her. But does it make sense to be controversial that she has now come and abandoned her?”
“…But if you’ve been a teaching assistant, you’ll do well in the future.”
“Think about it like this. Let’s say that Jinseong continues to have sex with the heroines and have fun, and concludes it.”
“Do you think he won’t bring another girl in there? Look at the concept A boy who only eats virgins. Uh? He’ll play with kids over 30 even if he’s pretty good.”
Maybe she had been pressing down on the accumulated emotions after looking at the comment window, but her brother was holding on to me and getting angry.
“For now, brother, calm down. Yes? And even if you just get mad at me, it’s not like the readers will listen to you.”
When I got up from the chair and hugged my brother from behind, my brother seemed to have calmed down a bit.
“…That’s the ending I’ve been thinking about from the beginning.”
I couldn’t bring myself to say that I should fix it a little bit because of the sullen voice.
In the end, my brother, who couldn’t even eat half of his meal, went into the bedroom like a zombie and fell face down.
After cleaning up the leftovers and washing the dishes, I followed him into the bedroom, and my brother crumpled his face again while looking at his phone.
“Confiscated.”
When I snatched my phone, my brother looked at me with a dynamic look.
“I’ve already seen it. Just give me.”
“No, I do not want. Oppa, even looking at this won’t help anything right now.”
“I don’t care if I have to see it or do something to fix it!”
All sorts of negative emotions were eating away at him.
Screw up.
Thinking that the midwinter writer I love was out of order, I took my brother’s cell phone and went out into the living room.
“What are you doing. Because it is different.”
“See you tomorrow. Lee Min Ho. Cool down a bit today.”
“Bring it back. Hannah.”
“Oh, why are you like this? Brother.”
He only looked like someone who was about to harm himself.
Of course, there were people who tried to criticize the development from an objective point of view in the comment section, but it was also full of rude people who did not.
Even if I only saw it, there was a lot of profanity written in the middle of the day, and there were also writings that said what to do with parents.
When he got up and tried to get his cell phone, I threw my whole body and made my brother dive back onto the bed.
“If I go to the comments right now, I won’t sleep with you for a week.”
Really… Do I have to go this far…
“…Naeun.”
“I know there will be no soup. I’m just going to lock the door in that secret room and not come out.”
When I bit my teeth and stopped my brother, my boyfriend finally gave up and put his hand on my stomach.
The two of us who had been lying side by side for a while and facing each other.
It was my older brother who broke the silence first.
“I am.”
“Yes.”
“It’s the first time I’ve received so many bad comments since I started writing under the name of mid-gyeol.”
“I guess so. Because this is my brother’s first work.”
“But I can’t come to my senses because you and the other readers I’ll meet say funny, funny, and then get beaten up.”
“I see. Oppa, I don’t think I’m normal right now.”
I don’t know where the laughing point was, but my older brother laughed and wiggled while holding onto my hair.
“I don’t know how you’re going to take this, but I thought readers would like my ending.”
“Oppa, are you really a psycho? How do you like that.”
No. I’m really comforting you, but is this person serious?
“I thought they would respect my choice even at the last minute, because they have liked my writing.”
“You are arrogant.”
“Maybe so.”
I just wanted to lie down and get a good night’s sleep, but my brother tried to get himself up again.
“Where are you going.”
“Go get your phone.”
“…Let’s try it with me, can I take it as such?”
Mr. Lee… Do you think you don’t like sleeping with me?
I sincerely thought about going out with my brother.
“No. I won’t see comments. Instead, I just want to write a little notice that I will be taking a break for a while.”
“Then bring it and write it in front of me.”
“Okay.”
My brother, who went to the floor with a trudging sound, started writing a notice next to me as if to look at it.
[Hello. It is midwinter.]
[It’s not long before the end, but I think I’ll have to take a break inevitably.]
[I would appreciate it if you could wait for a while for a better ending.]
“Is that okay?”
“Now give me your phone back.”
My brother obediently put the phone on my hand, and I left in a hurry and threw the phone on my desk and came back.
“I wasn’t planning on seeing you today anyway.”
“I confiscated it just in case you didn’t know. Go to sleep now.”
“When I close my eyes, I remember getting a pad rip. What should I do?”
I don’t know if it’s an overstatement or if it’s real, but I was confident that I would put my brother to sleep.
“Ha… Then there’s nothing I can do about it.”
I unbuttoned the buttons of my pajama one by one.
“Take it off. Lee Min Ho.”
* * *
Slope weed.
A term referring to a situation surrounded by enemies on all sides.
That was my situation right now.
[No. Why are you guys saying this and that?]
⤷[It’s because the writer is trying to have a fucking ending.]
⤷ [There is not a single thing that is not probable, but what is a dick? It’s you.]
⤷ [This black snowflake is a newbie at Webso.]
⤷ [Looking at how you taught your mother like that, it seems like you’re a parenting newbie]
I put on a cool pad lip and drank the Ah.
I don’t know how many of them have already had a keyboard battle like this.
I don’t have a real idiot.
This situation was also absurd, but honestly, I was surprised to find that I had a corner like this.
I was in a state of being very angry at the sudden announcement throughout the year while diligently following [I imprisoned her], Which I came across by accident because of her older sister and brother.
Should I say it felt like a thunderbolt in a dry sky?
When I saw it, it was a development without any problems, but the comment window for the latest episode was burning with fire, using Midwinter, the writer.
The most problematic thing was that Lee Jin-seong treated heroines as consumables.
I couldn’t sympathize enough to doubt whether they read the same novel as me.
Garbage is doing garbage, but why are they making such a fuss?
It wasn’t even mentioned.
While traveling, there were always scenes in which Lee Jin-seong explained to the slaves what their value was.
Since she is young and fresh, her face is beautiful and her body is solid, Lee Jin-seong has openly said many times that she enslaves them.
To be honest, I could have gone as far as writing my opinion in the comment section, but what I couldn’t stand was that these damn bastards made this writer year round.
If you’re going to swear, do it alone or just delete your favorite works.
Why did you curse the person you were looking at so well that you couldn’t see it?
I was so pissed off, but I had no place to consult about these things, so I thought of calling my sister at least.
Wait… Did you comment here too?
There were almost 600 comments, but I couldn’t find the nickname [White Snowflake] Anywhere.
What is it… I wonder if my sister agrees with the public opinion.
Wanting to ask what you think, I typed it and then erased it.
There’s no need to reveal that I’m a porn fanatic. What.
