Chapter 303 – Cookie Text/Complete Review
It’s been a while since I went to Sky Island. All the women are busy, so I’m the only one.
Now I could pass through any island in the sky with just a light swing of my sword.
After passing through dozens of sky islands, I finally arrived at what felt like the last place.
There was only one dolmen there.
And in front of it.
There was a boy with red hair.
‘What? Is it a mob?’
A peculiar feeling came from the boy. I approached.
Looking closely, the boy was a silver and black odd-eye.
He had a rebellious look there. If you make eye contact while walking down the street, you feel like borrowing a cigarette.
“What are you? What is it on Sky Island?”
I asked first. The boy’s eyebrows twitched.
“Sky Island? I guess that’s what they call this place? I came here from heaven. Huh.”
“That one? “You speak very briefly at first sight, you bastard.”
“What do you mean, you’re younger than I?”
It was absurd. What’s even more absurd is…
I felt the force of an absolute powerhouse from this guy.
“Hey, what are you?”
“Me?
Maseoshin. A thoroughbred born between a manager in heaven and a ruler in lustful hell.”
Answer as if there is something there. But I could tell.
I glared at him and nodded.
‘This is the foreign feeling I felt.’
Behind the boy named Ma Seosin, two pairs of huge, black wings were seen.
Not one pair, but two pairs. This isn’t a human, really?
“I’m Lasio. How did we get here? “What is the purpose?”
“Purpose? It’s simple. “I’m looking for something.”
“What is it?”
“Heart of the Star. Do you know anything?”
“No. Just looking at it, it doesn’t look like an ordinary item. Why… ?”
Ma Xexin scratched his head for a moment. He looked at me for no reason and smiled humbly.
“In the past… I made a big mistake. But while wandering around the multiverse, I heard an interesting story. “Fighting against a great evil?”
The demonic spirit smiles coldly. Maybe that’s a story about a witch gathering the main characters.
Ma Xioshin continued.
“I usually work alone, but suddenly I want to form a team.”
Now the purpose has finally come out.
Even, I saw something.
Tsutsut, Tsutsut!
Without realizing it, I looked through Maseo Xin’s memories.
Ma Seo-sin and her school friends smiling peacefully, fun after-school activities and disaster following.
The sadness of someone who lost everything seemed similar to Rao’s.
‘Is this guy also the main character? He must have been through a lot. ‘I guess he’s not a kid.’
The Demon God reaching out his hand to me.
“So please be the first member. A person of your level will be enough.”
“Me?”
“Yes, it’s just you.”
“I’m sorry, but I have a family to take care of.”
Maseoshin smiles lightly. Do you know what it means to start a family?
“How much does that damn family have?”
“Dozens.”
“… “What?”
“If you include my daughters, it’s a bit much, hmm.”
I felt embarrassed for no reason. Since the daughters will also be pregnant, the meaning of the clan will expand further in the future.
Maseoshin looks at me in confusion. I put a fist into my open hand.
“It might be fun though. “I can enjoy it before the witch comes.”
“Witch? Cooler than it looks? Okay, let’s try something villainous!”
“You say you will fight against evil someday?”
“Because it is always evil that kills evil. Wrong?”
I shook my head and smiled. Well, that’s right.
That’s how Korean society is.
Both I and Maseoshin smiled evilly and looked at each other.
I have a question.
“So, who do you plan on recruiting after me?”
“I watched about two.”
Ma Seo-sin, who was thinking while rubbing her chin, continued.
“First, there is a person with a similar body type to you. “The fighting is a bit tough.”
“Is that bastard a shota too?”
“Roughly.”
“Ha, what’s next?”
“Actually, I don’t know where it is. Ah, something that happened.”
It was absurd. Even though it is a school meal, there is no planning like this.
“… Are you kidding me?”
“Well, that human. Every time you die, you change your appearance and are reincarnated in another world. “The last thing I saw was that he had become a woman.”
“Now it’s TS? Ha.”
“Anyway, look forward to it. “Once everything is gathered, we will have fun stirring up this multiverse.”
“Okay… “The bigger the dream, the better.”
I chuckled lightly. I will miss the women, but I will miss my daughters.
I need to find it for a moment. And then he yawned as if shaking it off.
Soon
Epic
Looking forward to it unfolding.
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Hello, this is Grant, a writer who always strives to move forward. Nodding.
The complete review will be a bit long, so if you don’t have time or are not interested in me, you can leave now.
Because your time is precious. If you are curious about future serialization plans
Right at the bottom
You can go down to ! Then let’s begin.
First, I get depressed every time I finish a work. While I am publishing a series, I like to exchange comments and converse with readers.
I really liked it because it felt like playing with friends.
But now I’m sad because I can’t do that for the time being. Depression isn’t good if it lasts for a long time, but I don’t know what will happen ㅠㅠ But rather than dragging it on, I thought it would be better to properly show the ending that will come someday, so I finished it!
In fact, this series was not a very successful series in the eyes of others. I remember that I wasn’t even in the top 10 of the rankings, and I probably wasn’t even in the top 20 when I was free.
Nevertheless, I gritted my teeth and added it, and in the end, it was thanks to the readers that I continued until episode 300.
The grim story about me is that I have no money. Even now.
You have probably done everything you can in your life so far. Loading and unloading parcels, hard work (I hurt my back badly doing this, so I can’t do sitting work for long), office assistant work, building cleaner, wine bar assistant, etc.
But, perhaps because I was cursed, I had no talent or talent for anything.
It was the same with web novels, but at least web novels had at least 0.000000001% of that talent, and they were able to make it to this point.
So, if it were like before, I would have only published the free version and then overturned it, but somehow I dragged it out.
I didn’t have any money.
Without even lying, I had 200,000 won in my bank account.
I have to support my old father on my own, and I have to pay taxes and living expenses on my own, so I’m going crazy.
Worst case scenario.
This was a time when I was hitting the wall of limitations as I was serializing in Nobelpia and not getting enough readers.
To be honest, I was in a situation where the bad thought of wanting to go to the Han River and jump didn’t last a day.
This was around the time when February turned into March.
I thought about this while buying groceries at E-Mart.
‘Will I be able to come here alive next time, next month?’
With that in mind, I started out as a MILF collector.
Before talking about the next series, I should talk about how my mindset has changed.
The situation is so desperate that Daldongne’s last free serial is only ranked in the 50s or 60s at best.
Of course, I got contacted by several managers and there were some good suggestions.
As you know, it was a big gamble for me to serialize a work that may or may not turn out well, after receiving an advance payment that was almost like a debt.
So I end up rejecting all the suggestions. I wouldn’t know it if I got a call from a manager whose name I know.
I decided to stop publishing the Daldongne series.
And then I got angry. I was filled with this voice inside me.
‘I’m trying hard enough. How many writers are there who write as much and as hard as I do? But why don’t you understand?’
Just like Lasio in the story, I was disappointed and hated by the readers.
Now I know that it is suicidal for a writer to hate his readers. At that time, everything was hopeless.
I was furious at why they didn’t recognize me and ignore me even though I was trying so hard.
Meanwhile, I watched Simiken YouTube, a person who is famous among us.
I was watching a video on Simiken’s YouTube channel, and Simiken’s sincere advice made me see people again.
“
You think you’re trying and then you give up. But those words are meaningful only if they come from someone else, not you. So when you feel like that and want to give up, think of it this way. I haven’t really done my best yet. I thought I was doing my best, but I had the capacity to do my best.
.
“
I respect people like Son Heung-min and Faker. Although they are at the top of their field, they are people whose character is truly worthy of imitation.
But Shim Ik-hyeon was like that too. I just work hard at making AVs, what do I know? I thought it might be for social purposes.
Shim Ik-hyeon was just a man among men, and he was Jin-gook. I didn’t know he was such a deep thinker.
That was correct.
It was the same as the ugly woman who wanted to be a flight attendant and said, “Why don’t people recognize me? It’s a lot of money!”
What needed to change was myself, my writing, and that mindset. I knew I had to let people see me again.
I realized it. It was exactly my situation.
In the story, Lasio’s constant emphasis on show and prove was also an attitude that came from my mindset.
And I decided.
“Yes, I didn’t do my best. No one has ever told me that I did my best and that I can take a break, right? It’s still not enough. They say it’s too much or too little, but I want to do even that!”
I put my hands on the keyboard again.
At this time, I would have returned to Novelpia and was in the midst of finishing setting up the MILF collector.
There were many occasions when I realized some of my limitations while serializing the series (especially around episode 70, when I thought I should end the series because my reading had greatly reduced, thank you to the readers who asked me to continue!), But what made it possible for me to continue until episode 300 was this. It is not my will or ability.
In fact, I never imagined that I would even write 300 episodes!
As I write, I start to see inflows occasionally, and the number of daily views suddenly rises to 2,000, so in fact
A story that was serialized
Some people think of it as ashes. Of course, I was happy!
Even small changes like this are like hope to me.
It’s thanks to all the readers who followed and ran with a poor and pathetic writer like me.
I was even happy to see readers who often read this series. Are you still here? Hehe…!
While serializing
I felt sick really often.
To make matters worse, there were many times when I had to go to the hospital because I didn’t have money, but I just had to endure it with my body.
There was a time when my wrist was so sore that I could only do 2 strokes a day instead of 3.
There was a time when my lower back hurt like a herniated disc, so it took me a minute to get up from the floor while moaning.
I almost went crazy because I couldn’t sleep well because my shoulder hurt.
I even accepted my old father’s hysteria. Should I just jump at this time? I’ve even had that thought.
Yes,
Serialized in full, every single day
I did. I’m not specifically trying to diss any writers.
I’m sick, I’m mentally depressed, something suddenly comes up, I’m taking a break/let’s do something all year round? It’s all an excuse.
Even writers like me do this. I grit my teeth and just do it out of madness.
There’s nothing that writers over there who receive support from more readers than me can’t do, right?
Please do not try to hide your laziness with pity. Well, if something really can’t be helped, it can’t be helped.
To put it bluntly, there are people who sometimes make this argument.
“No, even if you’re a year-round writer, you can write deliciously, right? What’s the problem?”
I said it before, but is there a writer you like all year round? I could. Defending plagiarized novels? You can do it.
But if you’re a human being, don’t show off as ignorant.
The reason why I hate these people so much is that they are people who spend money in their field indiscriminately and are making the field itself sick.
Korea
Early light novel industry
Like.
Because of people like that, criminals were given human rights,
Because of people like that, Korean-Chinese and illegal immigrants still reside on the Korean Peninsula with voting rights,
Because of people like that, former professional gamers who engaged in match-fixing in e-sports and smart gamers who ran away with Coingate are actively active.
As you can see from the list of people who sponsored me, there were some people who sponsored me often.
However, there may be some people who are not visible in my work now.
I blocked it.
“What does it matter if our writer plagiarizes or anything?”, “It’s because our writer is sick that we do it all year round! Those who criticize are all cheating Geoyang〉ㅁ〈”
It’s up to you to cheer and support the author, but it’s not okay to do that all year round even though you know he’s a writer. I blocked him because I was disgusted by him doing such things.
In other words, such people can view my work, but they cannot express their opinions on my work.
I hope you all will not say the same thing because Nobelpia supports writers all year round.
So, if you really want the web novel industry to prosper, if you want to see works that are as good or better than the ones I see, let’s refrain from doing stupid things like that.
Low intelligence is not a sin. However, they did not bother to show it, saying things like, “Why are you criticizing Novelpia when we’re shoveling!”, “When are you coming, year-round writer? Assei! I’ll wait!” It’s stupid to do this. Even though this is the case, the writer doesn’t even recognize such nonsense.
I think there were quite a few enjoyable times while serializing.
Personally, while serializing in Nobelpia, my reading was always significantly reduced after 50 episodes, and the worst situation came to the point where I had to end it around episode 100.
But this MILF Collector was really different.
Even though it took a long time, it lasted long enough to maintain 1,000 views a day.
In addition, I was happy that it was included in one of the main events, 〉 works read by 〈 readers. And that too among outstanding works!
Of course, it may be a shame that it wasn’t included in the guaranteed serial serialization or PD picks, but I’ve already decided on this.
Since I myself criticize Novelpia and do not argue with the PD, it is a natural result. Even at this time, it has become natural to pick works in a sloppy manner, right? The writer
Year-round history
Even if there is.
On the other hand, I know that the works that readers read are an area that PDs do not touch, so I felt good that this in itself had already been recognized!
So it’s just a shame. Of course, popular writers don’t speak out about this. Because you have a lot to lose.
So, I will raise my voice and keep shouting. In particular, year-round writers are pathetic.
Even when we do Yasu, we do it to see the end. But why on earth do you stop serializing? When I was almost done, I said, “
Ah, I’ll cum next time! My aunt’s aunt passed away.” It doesn’t stop like this, right? LOL
It’s not because I’m just and have nothing to lose.
It’s something someone has to do, and no one else is doing it, so I’m just doing it.
I believe that if there are more people like me, something will change. Because there is no such effect, our country’s laws are still the same.
The final review was really long. That’s why this series was unusual in many ways.
My MBTI is INTJ, so I often criticized society, but I wonder if I blended in well.
It’s really sad and regretful to part ways with you like this. But this is the end of Lasio’s story.
Just as our life itself has meaning because of death. Wouldn’t a story also have meaning because it has an end?
The future serial plan is as follows.
First, I am preparing about two next works and will publish them in a series soon.
One piece is a typical
Nam Station Jeongjo Station Harem Action Fighting Film
And it is 19+.
The other work is
TS
It’s a cider pure love sub-whoopie story that lives like an aristocrat though.
It is.
Tomorrow
It is scheduled to be serialized starting around this time. I want to rest a bit, but my body is in a state where it needs to be.
How can a writer named Hako, who has no money, have a choice?
We are planning more than this!
I don’t know if it will go well, but if it goes well, I’ll be able to continue publishing without stopping at red lights!
There is a contest around October, right? I don’t have any close PDs, but I’m thinking of going out there. Is something going to happen this time too? Hehe.
If you click on my pen name, you can see various works, and you may even see new works serialized in real time!
Anyway, thank you again, dear readers.
I was always a poor writer, and my work was like that. Thanks to everyone who ran with us, even flower petals have opened!
If I were a successful and popular writer, I would like to invite all my readers to eat meat and drink together, but unfortunately, I can’t because living from day to day is too much.ㅠㅠ
I hope to see you again in another project! It was really fun! You won’t forget it!
I hope you have a cool summer and always be at peace.
Thank you. Nodding.
